第一部分 应用文之通知体裁解读及写法点拨
一、体裁解读
通知一般分为口头通知和书面通知两种。书面通知的语言简洁明了,要求明确。口头通知使用的语言具有明显的口语特征,通俗易懂。 二、书面通知和口头通知写法点拨 标题
口头:Announcement;书面:Notice 称呼语
Boys and girls;Ladies and gentlemen; Dear friends 正文:
四个W:who,what,when、where 落款
口头通知无落款;书面通知有落款 日期
口头通知无日期:书面通知有日期
第二部分 应用文之通知万能优秀模板
万能模板1 书面通知
Notice
All the students,
①There is going to be (事件)at (地点)on (时间)。/We are having a(n) (事件)at (地点)on (时
间)。It will begin at (具体时间)。Everyone can .You can (可以进行的活动)。
①Welcome to take part in on time./Please come on time. Thanks.
(落款) (时间)
注:
①具体阐述通知的内容 ①结束语,表达期望
模板内容可根据题目要求和具体情况取舍。
万能模板2 口头通知
Announcement
Boys and girls/Ladies and gentlemen,
①May I have your attention,please?①Now I've got a piece of good news to tell you. We're
going to (事件)We'll walk/ride/.go by bus to (交通方式)It's about away from .
(距离)As we'll be away for the whole day, please remember the following things. .The most important thing is (注意事项)I think we'll .
①That's all. Thanks for your attention. 注;
①吸引注意力
①通知的具体内容,表达期望 ①表示感谢
模板内容可根据题目要求和具体情况取舍。
第三部分 必备词汇与套用句型
必备亮点词汇 attention n.注意,留心 hope v.希望 activity n.活动 party n.聚会 in memory of 纪念
announcement n.通知 mind v.介意
spend v.度过,花(时间) celebrate v.庆祝
make up one's mind to...下决心·
经典套用句型 闪亮篇首句
May I have your attention,please?请注意啦!
Attention please. I have an announcement to make.请大家注意,我有一个通知要宣读。 I have something important/new/bad/interesting to tell you.我有重要的/新的/不好的/有趣
decide v.决定 hold v.举办 introduce v.介绍 pay a visit to 参观;看望 ......
的消息要告诉你们。
I have the honor of announcing that...我很荣幸地通知大家······
出彩篇中句
We are having a(n)...about...我们将有一个关于······的····.· There is going to be an important talk on the playground at 14:30 on May20.5月20日下午2:30在操场上将有一场重要的讲座。 To celebrate...,a(n)...will be held.为庆祝·····.,将举行····· We will pay a visit to...我们将会参观······
Do not forget to take... because we will...不要忘记带着···..·,因为我们要······图解 The expert will give a talk on...专家会就······话题进行演讲。
Mr.Brown will give us a talk about/on how to improve our strength.布朗先生将就如何提高我们的体能作一个报告。
精彩篇尾句
Do be present on time!请务必按时参加!
I hope you can take an active part in...我希望你(们)能积极参与······ That's all. Thanks for your attention.就是这些,感谢倾听。
第四部分 模板范文演练
一、书面通知
(黑龙江)为提高学生体能(strength),我校特邀请布朗先生作关于此方面的报告,通知如下:
时间:今天下午2:30 地点:学校操场 要求: 1.按时参加 2.自带椅子 3.穿校服
Notice
All the students,
Students' Union
万能模板套用分析 首先,点明主题。→主题 其次,安排具体事项。→事项 最后,提出要求。→要求 满分范文
Notice
All the students,
There is going to be a talk about/on how to improve our strength given by Mr.Brown.(句式多变原则,how to...为宾语从句,作 about/on的宾语。)1 We will meet in the playground at 2:30 p.m. today. Everyone should bring your own chair.And we must/have to wear school uniforms. Please do be on time.①
Students' Union
你也可以这样表达
① Mr. Brown will give us a talk about/on how to improve our strength. ①Please come on time. 范文译文
通知
所有的同学们:
将进行一场由布朗先生作的报告,报告是关于如何提高我们的体能。我们将于今天下午2:30在学校操场上集合。每个人都得带着自己的椅子。我们必须穿着校服。请务必准时参加。
学生会
二、口头通知
(武汉)假如你是李明。本周五早上你班同学将去格林农场参加实践活动。请你用英语草拟一则通知。 内容要点如下: 1.摘蔬菜,给植物浇水; 2.7点校门口集合,乘车前往; 3.体验农场生活,活动约2小时;
4.相互关照,注意安全; 5.补充一至两点有关事项。 注意: 1.词数:60~80;
2.不要逐条翻译,内容要连贯;
3.通知的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 参考词汇:experience v.体验 pick v.摘 activity n.活动 Fellow students,
Our class are going to Green Farm this Friday morning.
Thank you for your attention.
万能模板套用分析
首先,点明主题。(已给出)→主题
其次,阐述活动内容和注意事项。→具体细节 最后,表达祝愿。→祝愿 满分范文 Fellow students,
Our class are going to Green Farm this Friday morning.Would you like to experience farm life?① We can pick some vegetables and water the plants. We'll stay there for about 2 hours. I bet the meaningful activity will make the trip unforgettable.(长短句结合原则,前面的句子是简单句,此句中包含了一个省略that的宾语从句。)① We'll meet at 7 a.m.at the school gate and then take a bus there. Remember: always be with your classmates, help each other, and never do anything that may hurt you.(句式多变原则,此句是祈使句,其中that引导定语从句。)By the way,you'd better wear your sports shoes.① Have a good time.
Thank you for your attention.
你也可以这样表达
①Do you want to experience farm life?
①It is certain that the meaningful activity ill make the trip unforgettable. ① By the way,wearing your sports shoes is recommended.
范文译文 同学们:
我们班将于本周五上午去格林农场。你们想去体验农场生活吗?我们可以摘些蔬菜,给植物浇水。我们将在那里待两个小时左右。我打赠丰富多彩的活动会使旅途难忘。我们早上7点在校门口集合,然后乘公共汽车去那里。记住:时刻和你的同学们在一起,互相帮助。一定不要做可能使你受伤的任何事。顺便说一下,你们最好穿运动鞋。玩得愉快!
谢谢你们的聆听。
第五部分 中考真题优秀模板运用满分作文
A
(2020·湖北十堰·中考真题)
“人间烟火味,最抚凡人心”,2020年初,由于新冠肺炎的爆发,很多人都不得不待在家里,而不能外出打工谋生。\"地摊\"如雨后春笋在各大城市涌现。假如你是李华,在本周班会上将代表老师用英语通知学生参加一次摆地摊的体验活动。内容如下:
时间 本周 内容 你的想法和建议 参考词汇:
roadside the standard 地摊 Renmin Square n. 人民广场experience v.& n. 体验, 经历meaningful adj. 有意义的 要求:
1. 必须包含所给的全部的要点及内容, 可适当发挥。 2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名。
3. 词数80至100。开头已给出, 不计入总词数。 Fellow students,
This year due to the impact of COVID-19 outbreak, many people have to stay at home and can't go outside to work to earn a living. Roadside Stands have sprung up in many big cities. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
周日晚上7:00—9:00 地点人民广场 1. 出售报纸,饮料。2. 出售旧物:书,玩具,自行车等。3. 出售自制的蛋糕、卡片等。 …… ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】
Fellow students,
This year due to the impact of COVID-19 outbreak, many people have to stay at home and can't go outside to work to earn a living. Roadside Stands have sprung up in many big cities. There is going to be this activity at Renmin Square on Sunday evening.It will begin at7 p.m. Everyone can sell different kinds of things such as newspapers and drinks. We can also sell some old things including books, toys and bikes. Besides, if you are good at DIY, I think cakes and cards made by hand will be popular.As for the money we get, I suggest that we can give it away to the people in need.
You can take an active part in it. Through the activity, we can not only get some social experience but also spend a meaningful night.
Welcome to take part in the activity on time. Thanks. 【详解】
1.题干解读:该题属于材料写作。要求以李华的身份,在班会上代表老师用英语通知学生参加一次摆地摊的体验活动。写作时注意问题信息要写齐全。
2.例文点评:例文采用三段式,第一大段总体说班级要组织地摊体验活动;第二大段陈述组织地摊体验活动的时间及具体要求;第三大段陈述从这次活动中的收获及想法。本文结构清晰,段落分明。用第一人称来进行写作分析,时态主要以一般现在时为主。
3.高分亮点:
stay at home,earn a living,had better do sth,different kinds of,be good at,give away,短语:
take an active part in,not only…but also…。
句型:1.现在完成时 Roadside Stands have sprung up in many big cities.
2. 条件状语从句 Besides, if you are good at DIY, I think cakes and cards made by hand will be popular.
3.宾语从句 I suggest that we can give it away to the people in need.
B
(2018·贵州贵州·中考真题)
某地遭遇了洪水 a flood袭击,为了帮助受灾的人们,某国际学校打算发起一次捐赠 (donate动词;donation名词) 活动。假如你是学校广播站的播音员,请你将这次活动的相关事项,及早通知大家。
时间 地点 捐赠物品 其他 要求:
本周五下午3: 00-5: 00 学校操场 1. 书籍、衣物 2. 不要食物,因不便保存。 通知家人和朋友,一起来帮助受灾的人们。 1. 结构完整,表达通顺,语言规范,书写清晰。2. 以上10个划线部分为必写要点。 3. 文中不得出现任何真实的人名、学校名等信息。 4. 长度为80-100词。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 Boys and girls, may I have your attention,
please__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank you for your attention and kindness! 【参考范文】 Boys and girls,
may I have your attention, please?We’ve just got the news that there is a big flood in some area near our city. Many people have lost their homes and really need help from their
neighborhoods.There is going to be a donation on our school playground from 3: 00 to 5: 00 this Friday afternoon. Everyone can bring clothes and books there, but no food please, because it is not easy to keep fresh.You can also ask your family members and friends to join us.Your support will greatly help them overcome their difficulties.
Thank you for your attention and kindness! 【详解】
1. 题干解读:这篇作文要求考生根据表格提示的内容,写一篇关于捐赠活动的广播稿,介绍相关的活动事项,属于给材料作文。
2. 写作指导:审题可知,这篇短文应以第三人称和一般现在时为主,以第一人称为辅来叙述。写作时承接开头,紧扣要点提示,写清楚捐赠活动的时间、地点、需要的物品和其他相
关事项,最后表达感谢。行文注意主谓一致,保证无语法和单词拼写错误。
C
(2022·吉林长春·中考真题)
本周日,同学们将去民俗博物馆(the Folklore Museum)参观。假如你是学生会主席,请根据下面要点和要求,用英文向你校国际交换生发布一则不少于40词的通知。 要点:1.早8:00在学校集合; 2.带笔和笔记本; 3.馆内有英文导游;
4.做好记录,为参观后的讨论做准备。 要求:要点齐全;表述通顺;简洁得体。
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【参考范文】 All the students,
There is going to be a visit to the Folklore Museum on This Sunday. We will meet at 8:00 am at the school gate.Everyone can bring a pen and a notebook. .You can ask the English guides in the museum for help If you have any question.You should take notes carefully, and get ready for further discussion.
Please come on time.
Hope you will have a good time.
Student Union
【详解】
1.题干解读:本文是一则通知。介绍去民俗博物馆的注意事项。
2.写作指导:本文采用一般将来时,人称以第一人称和第二人称为主。分为两段式:第一段介绍集合的时间,地点以及需要带的物品;最后一段表达祝愿。写作时保持主谓一致性,做到无语法和标点错误。
D
(2021·黑龙江牡丹江·中考真题)
初中生活即将结束,你们将踏上新的征程。为了欢送毕业生,你校将在6月20日早上八点在学校礼堂举行毕业典礼。你是学生会宣传委员,请你写一则通知。内容如下: (1)必须穿校服;戴口罩;(2)保持会场安静;(3)离开时带走垃圾。
Notice
All the students,
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Students’ Union
【参考范文】
Notice
All the students,
There is going to be a graduation ceremony for Grade 9 at our school on June 20th. We are having the activity in our school hall. It will begin at8 o’clock.Everyone must wear school uniforms and masks. And keep quiet during the meeting.Last, please take your rubbish out when you leave. Please come on time.
That’s all. Thanks!
Students’ Union
【详解】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇通知类作文。以学生会的名义发一则有关毕业典礼的通知。 2.写作指导:本文主要采用一般将来时。在通知中描述毕业典礼的时间,地点,需要注意事项。写作时要做到语法和标点无错误。
E
(2020·黑龙江黑龙江·中考真题)
难忘的初中生活即将结束。你们班计划举行\"告别初中生活\"的主题班会。假如你是班长, 根据以下提示, 用英语写一则通知。要点如下: 1、时间:7月18日 下午3:00; 2、地点:班级;
3、活动内容:对老师用话语表达谢意, 同学交流、合影等等。 Boys and girls,
The wonderful middle school life will go to the end.
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Don't be late! That's all. Thank you!
David
【参考范文】 Boys and girls,
The wonderful middle school life will go to the end.
We are having a class meeting at 3:00 on the afternoon of July 18. It will be held in our classroom.The theme of the class meeting is saying goodbye to our middle school life. We should say a thankful word to our teachers. Everyone can chat freely with our classmates and take some photos.
Don't be late! That's all. Thank you!
David
【详解】
1.题干解读:该题目属于通知写作。在写作时应紧接开头继续写作,根据内容提示介绍主题班会的时间、地点以及活动的内容。
2.例文点评:例文主要用第一人称进行写作,主要采用一般将来时态来写作。介绍班会的具体信息,叙述完整且条理清晰。 3.高分亮点:
短语:go to the end; have a class meeting; saying goodbye to; chat freely with; take some photos。句型:we should do和we can do表示建议的句子;and表示并列的句子;Don't do…祈使句的否定形式。
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